Every dawn I see brings hope anew
Every dawn I see brings hope anew
The rise of the brightly golden orb
The rise of the brightly golden orb
The rise of every hope anew I see
The golden orb brings the dawn
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Gently rising from the sea
Gently rising from the sea
Establishes a peace within
Establishes a peace within
The sea from within rising
A peace establishes gently
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Waves tenderly kiss the shore
Waves tenderly kiss the shore
Awakening my soul this day
Awakening my soul this day
The tenderly awakening shore
Waves kiss my soul this day
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The waves dawn anew this day
Every shore brightly brings hope
Establishing a golden rising of the orb
Gently the peace within the sea
Awakening the kiss tenderly I see
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© Carol Campbell 2015
The Prompt:
“I’m all about structure this week, weirdddd. Anyways, paradelles are some of my favorites, it’s a really nice challenge! They were invented to be a parody (hence the name) to villanelles by US Poet Laureate Billy Collins. There, that’s your history lesson for the day!
Life constantly renews itself. The fresh, crisp air of today took the place of a sullen downpour that came upon us, last night.
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How very lovely! Thank you!
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What a coincidence.. I didn’t see your post before I wrote mine, but I find a lot of similarities between both our paradelles. Wonderfully penned!
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I will check yours out! Thank you!
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I haven’t started yet. And each of you poets are churning out gems after gems. This one is really too good Carol 🙂
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Awww. Thank you Sunita!
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Loved this one! Great job on the paradelle…<3
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I am so glad you liked this! 🙂
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Your paradelle is impressive. Good use of the form.
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Thank you, Cressida!
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Beautiful paradelle. Well done!
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That means a lot Al. Thank you!
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what a kewl poem!! the word patterns are like gentle waves upon the shore. the term paradelle is very close to a technical term used in drumming rudiments, called the paradiddle.
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Cool!
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Brilliant ! Well done!
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Thank you!
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What an interesting form, your words and this style reads like a mantra…just beautiful!
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You have made my day! You can visit anytime 😀 ❤
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I enjoy my visits although I sometimes get so busy I lose tract of some amazing blogs.
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Me too. 😦
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Hope is something I need. 💕💕
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You certainly inspire hope so you deserve some for yourself!
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Aww thank you so much for that, Carol. Your continued support means so much to me.
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❤
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