Painting my emotions with black ink
Matching my darkest of moods
Your sharp quill has etched into me
Your depression has made me think
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Expressing myself on the canvas
As I struggle to truly understand
The reasons that you deeply hurt me
Adding to my own depth of darkness
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Swirling lines of swinging emotions
Rational thought redefined by hate
Bringing us back to the deep opaque
Honesty lost to the never ending lies
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I still love you.
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© Carol Campbell 2015
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Darkness is indeed easier understood when we, too, have been there. ♥
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Very true. Thank you for the visit!
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Open, honest plead written in a way to evoke my emotions as a reader.
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This comment makes me happy! Thank you!
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You are welcome. If I can make someone happy then great things are happening :).
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Your love seems a tad more unconditional than anything the other seems to have served up.
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You are so very kind!
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What an amazing work! It speaks to me–I have been in that position more than once. Sadly, those who break one’s heart this way rarely are grateful for the sacrifice made.
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So true. Thank you for visiting and commenting!
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I think on one level you can never really cease to love someone.. that’s why love hurts.
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I agree! Thanks for the visit!
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Love can be so hard.
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Yes. Thank you!
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Very moving poem. I love the first line and how it sets up the rest of your poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Susan!
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Lots of heart-felt angst…
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True! Thank you for visiting!
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Pain and grief, loss and sadness…all part of the never finished canvas of life
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awesome poem! i just ❤ the last line 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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That last line got me. Unexpected.
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Thank you very much!
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