Self
One lost
The shadow
Images of
My old reality
Decomposing before my eyes
Where has the natural girl fled to now?
In the forest or by the sea dancing carefree
The older woman will dance with the young
Age will them unite timelessly
The ages merging here
There will be joy
Wholeness too
Woman
Me
~
© Carol Campbell 2015
Photo Challenge from: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/11/03/photo-challenge-85/#like-3201 with the word “decompose”
Carol – thank you so much for responding to the MLMM photo prompt!
Your verse – it is incredibly powerful – the reflections and understanding – unfolding in decomposition – which results in a new composition – and composite – is truly moving. Deeply felt and understood.
The older woman will dance with the young
Age will them unite timelessly
These 2 lines – they are, for me – the center – the pivotal point in which your entire piece balances – working incredibly well with what preceded and consequently, followed.
Amazing!
Cheers
Pat
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Oh my! Your comment really made me happy! Thank you for your beautiful prompt!!
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Your most welcome and I’m glad you enjoyed the prompt 🙂
You wrote a beautiful piece 🙂
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Thanks!
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The girl and the wise woman, the matter and the shadow, the light and dark will all dance together. Write on!
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Thank you for that supportive comment!
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Beautiful words coming from a beautiful mind!
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I am most grateful! 🙂
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it’s like the butterfly emerging from the chrysalis. well done!!
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Thank you!
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Great piece
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Thank you.
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Wow we are on the same wavelength. I get it.
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That’s great. Thank you!
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Came from your heart-beautifully done!
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Thank you!
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Brava!!!! love where you went with this one.
you
woman
ageless
love
limitless
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Am very grateful, Cheryl!
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I have to agree with Pat on this, those lines were the pivotal lines. A gorgeous introspective work!
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I really appreciate your input and comments!
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