De-light-
Full is the night with
The moon
Shining bright up-
On the hill
A-
Ware are we
Of the Un
Filtered gaze of
That wise old
Man a-
Midst the stars
Building a
Scaf-
Folding right to
The heavens of
Divine
Love
~~
© Carol Campbell 2015
Prompt from: http://dversepoets.com/2015/11/05/lets-get-jambin/#like-11006
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Today at The Bar, I want us to get enamored with enjambment.
Pronounced: (en-JAM-ment)
Officially, (according to poetryarchive.org):
“Enjambment is the continuation of a sentence or clause over a line-break. If a poet allows all the sentences of a poem to end in the same place as regular line-
breaks, a kind of deadening can happen in the ear, and in the brain too, as all the thoughts can end up being the same length.”
Simply put, enjambment occurs when a phrase carries over a line-break without a major pause. In French, the word means “straddling.” Imagine a word or phrase straddling across the lines or spacing of the poem. Perfect, right? When you read an enjambed line, it encourages you to keep reading without stopping for a breather, as it were.
Particularly with traditional poems, each line was usually its own thought, and rhymes were often predictable and rhythmic (end-stopped).” De Jackson
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Carol, this is just a wonderful example. I love what you did with spacing, right and left justified.
Oh! THIS:
“Shining bright up” — “up” becomes a noun here, something to be shined into your life.
I’m also deeply enamored of what you’ve done with:
“Scaf-
Folding”
Excellent! Thank you so much for jambin’ with us!
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My distinct pleasure. Thank you for a wonderful prompt and a de-light-full comment!
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Love the style!
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Thank you, Chris!
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You’re welcome!
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I love the reading the words en-jambed from left to right ~ This is de-light-ful Carol ~
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I am so glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Absolutely love the way you weaved this poem 🙂 Great write.
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Your comment means so much!
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You really aced this form! Per-
fec /tion! (Smiles.)
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I was not sure. Thank you. That’s encouraging!
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Great piece
Lots of images
And word play
Love how you wrote
As always Sheldon
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Thank you!
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Di
Vine
Love
God
dess
God s
He
R
Love
un
con
Di
T
ion
Ally!..:)
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I love that!! Thank you!
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Smiles.. And thanks to you.. My friend..:)
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What a wonderful play on such a wonderful subject.. the back and forth and the light of delight… love it.
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That makes me feel very good! 🙂
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you really jam(b)ed this! bravo.
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Thank you! It’s kind of addictive this jambin’, huh?
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the de-light of de light is so kewl – you be jammin while you be jambin’ ;-D
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Hahaha!
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