One day the message came unheralded
Brought by her closest friend early one day
Nervously, with trembling hands she opened
Temptation was strong to push it away
Scent of violets rose unabated
Her fears had surely led her far astray
Scribed on this note were promises of love
With this affection her heart rose above
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© Carol Campbell 2015
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Thank you, Susie Clevenger for a wonderful prompt!
the poem hits the heart–we’ve all been there though now those emotional missives come by email. Yet the sensation is still the same.
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It sure is. The paintings in this prompt were so enticing ad writable! Thank you!
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You’re welcome. I didn’t get to this prompt yet. Maybe tomorrow.
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Very sweet take on the prompt!
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Thank you, Rommy!
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I like this, and the picture is so expressive and fitting. 😃
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I am very glad that you like it!
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You can just feel her nervousness in opening that envelope! 🙂
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That’s what I felt when I saw it!
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You captured the young girl in the painting so well. Young love is so tender. Thank you so much for taking part in the prompt!
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Thank you, Susie! This was a great prompt.
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So beautifully sad. You’re still on top form Carol. Merry Christmas Xx
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Same to you! How is your pain?
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I’m feeling a lot better,thanks. Thanks for all the prayers Carol
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Temptation was strong to push it away…
I get this most clearly from the portrait.
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Scribed on this note were promises of love
With this affection her heart rose above
Just shows how love can overcome! It can break the heart but it can also create and sustain the joys of life! Great lines CC!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank! Your comments are always like a poem!
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deep and beautiful.
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Thank you very much!
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I adore the ending and the insight as it tumbled down the page-well done~
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Thank you so much!
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How often does one’s self-doubt bleed into a relationship with another!
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Yes!
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love letters the old fashioned way. maybe she feared a rejection, but her worry turns to exultation. wonderful!
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Thank you!
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