Around the river all life flows
To the water everyone goes
For fishing, playing cleaning too
In villages this is the view
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Women on a rock beating clothes
Around the river all life flows
Men fishing for today’s good bread
Children playing far from their bed
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Feeling joyous release from cares
Their day’s actions are truly prayers
Around the river all life flows
The feeling of lack no one knows
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The ways of old are prevalent
Ancient wisdom is dominant
Perspectives change when rhythm slows
Around the river all life flows
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© Carol Campbell 2015
The Prompt From: http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2015/11/poets-united-midweek-motif-river.html
The River
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Nicely done Carol.
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Thank you very much!
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Commenting on the River poem. I love the scene you paint here and can see it as I read. Thank you too for commenting on my post!
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My pleasure!
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I agree with Peggy. The meter and the rhyme scheme imitate the ebb and flow of the river. Very nicely done!
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That makes me happy! 🙂
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Yay 🙂 You’ve inspired me to write about a river.
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I can’t wait!
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Coming tomorrow 🙂
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Such a tender & heartfelt write 🙂
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Thank you so!
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This poem is so lovely. I hadn’t thought about all the cleansing jobs a river has. Love the picture too.
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I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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this was an informative and sincere approach to the theme of “river.” i enjoyed it quite well.
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Thank you!
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I really like this one, Carol. So true that much of life, in days of old, took place around the river. Fishing, washing clothes, bathing, etc. We have come such a long way. The river is a timeless entity, gives SO much to every generation.
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I could not agree more. Very sacred! Thank you!
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Hi Carol
I love the sound of your poem. And the picture of life it paints. Lovely!
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Hi! Thank you very much!
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oh I like this, bringing to life the river folk… and I love the way the one line advances within the poem. very nice
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Thank you very much!!
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that’s what I’m talking about 🙂
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🙂
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How beautiful the flow of this poem with its perfect refrain “around the river all life flows.” And the images are vivid and the picture even, a symbols of cleansing and unity and community. The rhyme seals all into a wonderful experience for me (and another reason to keep rivers clean and flowing).
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Thank you for the kind comment! 🙂
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I echo this comment particularly about keeping our waterways unpolluted. Great photo.
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Thank you!
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I like this very much! Lovely use of repetition.
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Thanks, Rosemary!
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And a wonderful l poem which flows full circle…life is a constant even if the waters change from time to time
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So true! Thank you!
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A place I’d like to visit… 🙂
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Yes!
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I like the sequencing of the line “around the river all life flows” from 1st to 4th line in each stanza. the photo reminds me of how women in the third world have to work in and around water, spending hours to carry necessary water for cooking, hygiene, etc. – well done!
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I was remembering that too as I wrote!
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A very evocative poem, Carol, taking the reader back to archetypal images and memories, back to simpler times where living on the shores of a river ensured a human connection with Mother Nature and with what she provides.
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Exactly what I was thinking of! Thank you!
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