First light dawns
Starting to see only outlines
© Carol Campbell 2015
Heeding Haiku with Chèvrefeuille and Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie.
“Haiku has three lines as you all know and maybe we can bring balance in those lines, by association. I will give an example (by the way the following haiku are just for explaining Baransu).
‘a walk through the city’ … in this line we can see already a few possible things to associate on e.g. “walk” and “city“. I have chosen to use “walk” to associate on, and came to this 2nd line:
‘step by step I discover’ … in this line the possible associations can be on “step” and “discover“. I have chosen to use “discover” and came to this third line:
‘a newly built world’
Let me bring the three lines to each other than the following haiku will be formed:
a walk through the city
step by step I discover
a newly built world
The above haiku is, in my opinion, Baransu, in balance. That balance I have reached through associating on the different images in every line of the above haiku.~Chèvrefeuille (Baransu means balance)
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