The fire rages
Sparks spin off from flames
Tempers burning
~
© Carol Campbell 2015
Prompt Word From:
https://artandlife11.wordpress.com/2015/12/01/miniature-writing-challenge-19/#like-1742
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The fire rages
Sparks spin off from flames
Tempers burning
~
© Carol Campbell 2015
Prompt Word From:
https://artandlife11.wordpress.com/2015/12/01/miniature-writing-challenge-19/#like-1742
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I like the comparison between a raging fire and a temper burning. That middle line is evocative!
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome 🙂
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I’ve had that temper burn a time or two, thank goodness my wife was around to calm me down. Very nice my friend.
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Thank you. I’m enjoying the prompt world!
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I see bunches of small twigs in this fire causing a constant crackling, like bunches of little grudges put into a pile building up — more flaring eventually.
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A very well written ku … nicely done indeed!
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That means a lot coming from a haiku master! Thank you!
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Ah … I’m not actually a haiku master my dear Carol … but I can recognize a lovely haiku when I see one … thank you so much for the compliment 🙂
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