Flow Galang Pratama
Galang Pratama

Flowing, cascading toward the light

Watering all the souls with might

Submitting with humility

The river of humanity


Energy increases from flow

Obstacles only make her glow

Propelling her towards unity

The river of humanity


Abide with patience as she goes

Her way will be found through the throes

Leaving behind insanity

The river of humanity


© Carol Campbell 2015

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The Prompt:

“Your Challenge:  Write a new poem about (and pumped full of) energy.”~Susan
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Published by: writersdream9

I have been writing all my life but for the most part, it has been a secret. My parents did not believe writing was a good way to earn money so I hid my poems. Then one day, I wanted to comment on an essay that a friend had written and found myself with a blog. That quiet whisper inside said, "You can write your poetry and no one will ever know.". I knew nothing of followers and the like at that time. So, here I am trying to learn my craft and enjoying every moment of it. My personal details are, I'm 57, married for 39 years, have one grown son who is God's gift to us and last but not least at all, I'm a Baha'i which basically means that I love all humanity.

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14 thoughts on “Momentum~Kyrielle”

  1. beautiful and I love, love, love these two lines “Flowing, cascading toward the light

    Watering all the souls with might” — it’s funny though I wrote something using similar imagery last night. Great minds think a like! It was for another prompt and I still need to finish it (I fell asleep before I got more than half done.) Still this makes me very happy 🙂

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  2. it’s like this river is flowing back to the sea, back to source from whence all life comes. the land/earth represents the obstacles to overcome. but water is such a flexible substance. beautiful rhyme, beautiful picture.

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