Fem Talia Felix
Talia Felix

Our hands reach for one another

Knowing we are different but the same

Hands, feet

Eyes, hearts

We both have them all

Just in different ways

Human beings with

diverse roles

Qualities that the world needs

Feminine, masculine

I celebrate our diversity.


© Carol Campbell 2016

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Prompt word is Fem.

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Published by: writersdream9

I have been writing all my life but for the most part, it has been a secret. My parents did not believe writing was a good way to earn money so I hid my poems. Then one day, I wanted to comment on an essay that a friend had written and found myself with a blog. That quiet whisper inside said, "You can write your poetry and no one will ever know.". I knew nothing of followers and the like at that time. So, here I am trying to learn my craft and enjoying every moment of it. My personal details are, I'm 57, married for 39 years, have one grown son who is God's gift to us and last but not least at all, I'm a Baha'i which basically means that I love all humanity.

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16 thoughts on “Feminine”

  1. What a beautiful approach 🙂 !
    I also like how you parted the different parts. I think we all are individual and that that’s perfectly fine. We shouldn’t let religion or other things let us stop ourselves from finding ourselves and our paths.
    The words you chose are doing great to make your thoughts clear.

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  2. The layout adds an interesting effect to your poem – making those leaps from one part to the next and bringing it back to the centre with those final two lines. Excellent 🙂

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