My memories of that February are vivid
They are still caught deep in my throat
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Your obstinance and coldness made me livid
As you manipulated my every move
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That frightful day, you described me as frigid
Surprising as I watched icicles form on your heart
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I guess my love for you had grown viscid
When I forgave you, warmth returned
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© Carol Campbell 2016
Music Prompt from Marian.
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Delightful images Carol……Terse…yet evocative. 😉 Hugs!
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Thank you! Have a wonderful day!
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Have a lovely week-end. Hugs!
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I’m glass you could both melt again…
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Yes! Thank you!
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That ending is so good. Well-penned. 🙂
-HA
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Thank you!
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Lovely and well written! I wanted to thank you for all your support and lovely comments on my poetry! You were one of my most frequent visitors in 2015 and I love you for it! I am so sorry I can’t always read but my life offline has been so difficult lately I don’t always have the time but I will try to make more in 2016. Hugs and kisses!
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It is truly my pleasure to read your work!
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And yours mine!
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i love the whole narrative of this piece. i can so relate
gracias for sharing
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De nada. Es mi placer! Gracias a ti!
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Forgiveness isn’t always easy but it is necessary. Glad this had a good ending.
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I agree!
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Thank you so much!
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It takes a large heart to forgive such hurt. Well penned.
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Thank you!
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how often we grow icicles on our heart when in reality we long for the sunshine to melt away the hurt, not thinking or believing we could ever hope to see the sun again.
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VERY nice ~~~~
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Thank you, Helen!
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I don’t know, the forgiveness here seems to be on the surface of things.
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Interesting, Marian. Thank you!
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One of my favorite songs and you capture the essence of the cold of February so well in your poetry…beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome!
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