at the seashore
wind of summer through my hair
the shortest night
© Chèvrefeuille
gulls float on air around me
sand crunches under my feet
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the moon cools the sand
sea glass twinkles in my eyes
my toes get wet
how I wish you were here
to share this enchantment
~
salty air lingers
breezes waft o’er the tide
a crab scurries
you didn’t like seafood
told me it was too musky
~
the foghorn bellows
as the mist comes in to land
the clang of the buoys
perfect moments to snuggle
yet alone to find comfort
~
flames up ahead
warmth in the chilled air
roasted marshmallows
thoughts of our honeymoon
we were young, free and in love
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stars guide seafarers
a ship on the horizon
it makes no sound
we never took a cruise
preferred the feet for travel
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surf pounds the shore
waves crash on jagged rocks
sharp barnacles grow
~
the shortest night filled with loss
the seashore is still my home
~
© Carol Campbell 2016
“The goal of this feature is to write a Soliloquy no Renga, a Renga composed by one person. With this feature it is possible to help you to be more associative, because you have to compose an all new renga with at least six (6) links.As you all know a renga has stanzas of three and two lines. The first verse “hokku” gives the title to the renga and sets the entire image of your renga. By association on the verse before the verse you have to write you can make the renga a complete story. The Soliloquy no Renga is just for fun and I hope it will bring you the fun and inspiration as I had in mind. You can choose on your own how much links you use, but at least (as I said above) six (6) links. The last link has to make the “circle complete” and in that way has a link with the first verse. That last verse is called “ageku”.
at the seashore
wind of summer through my hair
the shortest night
© Chèvrefeuille”
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Eh..this is so picturesque! Really, an excellent one!!!
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Thanks so much!
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🙂
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Carol, this was so romantic and longing moments you shared here…the more the poem advanced the more attached we became to your story. Well done!!
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Thank you, Cheryl-Lynn!
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You’re welcome. I’m glad I had a chance to read it before leaving for work.
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Working on a Sunday? Bless you!
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Indeed, Sundays to Thursdays.
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Ahh. I pray that you enjoy your job!
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oh, this is so lovely 🙂 makes me want to fall in love again!
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Thanks so much, Lee!
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Lovely Carol…..You surpassed yourself with such consistent effective metaphors…..difficult to pick out a particular one…but…I am most taken by…”sea glass twinkles my eyes..” Super piece….Hugs! ❤
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Thank you! Very nice comment!
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Hugs!
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Images of summer are a fine counterpoint tot he beauty of our shrinking snowscape.
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For sure!
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wow, this is wonderful. It’s like paging through someone’s recollections. “sea glass twinkles in my eyes” — what an exquisite image! It caught my attention and fired my imagination!
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Like a compilation of momentary images, huh? Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome and yes, that too!
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Stunning imagery in memories. Love this!
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Thank you!
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Lovely verse, Carol 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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I have never tried some of these forms you write so easily with! Awesome I am overwhelmed by the beauty of it. Enjoy your day! Hugs!
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Easily? Not really but I do love learning. This was my first one in this form! Thanks so much!
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AWE I don’t know what to say this is beautiful!
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Thank you. Speechless is a good comment! 🙂
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I’m try to comment with my first reaction. You’re a beautiful writer.
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Thank you. You are an artist supreme!
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Oh wow well thank you so much! That is very humbling Carol I’m happy you think so! 😀 ❤
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very personal and very powerful as well as romantic and longing
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I love this Carol. Feeling sand beneath my toes:)
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I’m so glad you enjoyed reading. 🙂
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