The land before me is white and very cold as I walk down my country lane. Smells of wood burning and Pinon suffuses. A blurred world that hides the potential of the changing seasons. I need the exercise so I move.
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Above my hatted head, I catch sight of a beautiful falcon lazily spiraling. Light reflects in the tiny snow crystals collected on every surface I see. There is a white rabbit barely noticeable because of his color that matches the snow. Look! There is a burst of color. A flowering quince blanketed with Winter’s powder.
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A promise of Spring.
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cold and snow
the Falcon soars for warmth
a pink quince flowers
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© Carol Campbell 2016
Kanzensakura lends is beautiful photo to the pub gatherers this week for haibun Monday.
“So today, I would like you all to write a haibun based on the photograph. Please use the compact haibun form for this: one or two tight paragraphs with one haiku, in fewer than 200 words. The photograph will be used in your post. I ask only that you make note of the caption below the photograph and also add “Used by permission”.”
Please go explore the wonderful writers at the pub!
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Just Beautiful! I love the hints of spring in this poem. It’s a lovely reminder of the season to come! 🙂
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Grateful to you. I’m still searching for the signs of Winter here 😉
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me too, we have the cold and the dead foliage but that’s it.
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Our temps have started falling.
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It’s supposed to snow tonight here. I’m not sure if it will accumulate though.
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Cool.
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I just hope it lets me get home first! 🙂
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Beautiful imagery within your words Carol.. Thank you ❤
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Thank YOU! 🙂
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I enjoyed the warm sightings on this cold winter walk!
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Beautiful poem to go along with a beautiful photo!
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Thanks so much!
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SMiLes.. Flower
and Hawk n0w
liVe SpiRaLinG
dReams ’round
Sun or Bees
SunG aS
SonG of
Free..
FloWers spiRaL
Golden eYes
aLL..:)
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Yes they do! 🙂 Thank you.
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Smiles.. My friend.. You are welcome and thank you..:)
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I like the mention of the falcon and rabbit and then the pop of color.
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So glad you enjoyed!
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I see, like I have, you felt the need to introduce animals into the scene. It simply needs them to bring meaning to the photo I believe. However, you have chosen animals whose entities are as symbolic and meaningful as the idea of a bloom in snow. Wonderful.
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Thanks very much, Gay. I did not intend to but there they were. 🙂
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beautiful photo, beautiful story beautiful little poem.
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You did a masterful job working with Toni’s image prompt, set the scene wonderfully. I, too, like to introduce animals in my writings, especially prose, to create a sense of authenticity for the scene.
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Thank you, Glen!
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The prose is so poetic and the tightly woven haiku sums it all up!
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Thank you, Victoria!
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What poetic prose you have written, Carol!! your haiku is also stunning!
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Thank you very much.
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What a gorgeous scene that is set along the winter walk. I love how you point out the wildlife and the promise of spring and renewal. So enjoyed your beautiful haibun, Carol.
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That means a lot. Thank you.
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A magical moment in the snow. I enjoyed reading.
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I am so glad you did. Thanks!
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splendidly written!
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Thank you!
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This is beautiful!
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Thanks so much, Joy.
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