The night ended too soon
In love under a full moon
Music danced them around
Fully engaged in the sound
She always caused him to swoon
To others they were immune
With love they were fully bound
Just too tired to really slow down
~
© Carol Campbell 2016
The prompt word at the Pub is DANCE and we are to write a Quadrille of 44 words. Thank you, Bjorn.
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Oh so much music to bring hearts together…
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Yes! Enchanting. Thank you.
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Dancing and in love…nothing quite like it. Loved the “cartoon”…really funny! :~)
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I’m very glad you enjoyed. Thank you!
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Could hear the music, first waltz then tango; nice rhyme scheme; a fun romp.
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Thank you, Glenn!
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Sometimes love brings on the adrenaline, I think!
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Me too. Thank you, Mary!
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Really fun and sweet!
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Thank you!
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Ah, many an eve ends to soon when the couple is dancing as the saying goes, “cheek to cheek.” Do young people do that anymore????
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I sure hope so. Thanks, Lillian!
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“music danced them”, very clever use of the prompt
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Thanks, Walter!
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Really like the illustration and the idea that she caused him to swoon…delightful rhymes!
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Thanks so much, Lynn!
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Beautiful: )
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Thank you!
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I envision a place actually called “Fernando’s Hideaway”.
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Haha! Yes.
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I love this visual/poem combo. 😉
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Thank you so much!
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Sounds like quite a couple! I’d like to be in love like that! And I love the switch you employ, where he’s the one swooning! 🙂
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You liked? Great. Thanks.
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Yes I liked it! It was a very sweet poem. 😀
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Yay! 🙂
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What a romantic dance under the moon ~
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Yes. Thank you!
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Hi, Carol! Love this fun poem! The last line…too tired to really slow down… 🙂
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Thank you so.
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This is beautiful my friend.
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Thank you.
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“To others they were immune”—ah, sweet love 🙂
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Thanks, C.C.
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Humanity deviating now..
Modern halls dancing life..
reflecting nature changes
as overpopulating humans
changing behaviors with
females hooking up with
females.. rear to rear
and no longer
dancing now
romancing
cheek to
cheek.. oh..
the bootie
dancing
is tRuly
An old/new
human rule…:)
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Yes and they are still dancing! 🙂
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Dance aLive
wITh sMiLes
and SonG..:)!
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🙂
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Appropriate for upcoming Valentine’s Day… love the retro picture.
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Thanks, Kathy! Yep that love day is coming!
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This was bound to happen for those in the throes of deep love! They lived in their own world and time stood still!
Hank
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That’s for sure. Thanks, Hank!
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romantic this one…. enjoyed.
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I am so glad. Thank you!
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I see a scene from a Fred Astaire movie with his leading lady, top hat, cane, tuxedo, the whole deal, together with his elegantly dressed lady, putting on the nines as they used to say.
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lovely…!!
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Thank you!
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