
He wasn’t really running but his steps were heavy and purposeful. The sound of the gravel under his feet was strangely comforting where usually it grated on his nerves. In his soul, he was fleeing also. Trying to escape the realities of his messed up thoughts. The internal journey was the one that tore him to pieces.
How could he have trusted Larry? “Man, I’m tired of dealing. Tired of trying so hard to trust!”, he silently screamed.
The kids were playing outside when Melissa told him. Softly, she described how Larry had made suggestive comments to her. Larry had been persistent but so had she, in refusing. Finally, she chose to be transparent about it.
Walking was starting to calm him. The fresh air, the movement of his body were all serving to bring clarity. He didn’t really have any answers yet, but the fog of stress was lifting. He started focusing on all that he was grateful for. Beginning with having a wife that was trustworthy and sensitive. Thankfulness for the beauty around him and his adorable children. Oh yes, he had many blessings. The surety that, though it may be hard, they all would work through this. Somehow.
© Carol Campbell 2016

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This is a great piece of writing, exploring something that is relatable. I love the outcome.
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Thank you very much! I’m starting to enjoy fiction!
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You are welcome! You do it so well 🙂
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wow a gripping tale with a hopeful end! Glad everything will work out in time.
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Glad you liked it! 🙂
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I always enjoy your writing. I look forward to reading your posts 🙂
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Wonderful story! I love how he counts his blessings. 🙂
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Thank you!
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My pleasure!
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Sometimes it’s difficult to tell who to trust. But the truth usually does come to light in the end. Loved the story!
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Thank you very much!
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It’s nice to see a faithful wife in fiction! It’s reassuring that there is still hope in relationships. Nice piece!
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Faithfulness went out of fashion! Thank you!
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one of life’s many pressure point moments. well written. that’s one busted friendship!!
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I like the lead in to the main point, took me in a different direction to what I was first thinking. So glad they have a relationship where they can tell each other things. Hopefully the ‘friend’ will no longer be in their lives.
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Agreed!
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I hope not! Thank you!
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Such a great take on the prompt! I could feel him processing the situation as he was walking. I was a walker too- for the same reasons. Walking would bring clarity. I usually had to begin with runnnnning! So that I could release the anger before I could think. Well told! So glad you could participate this week. Hope to hear from you in Week #5.
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Thank you, Roger! I enjoy your prompts very much!
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