Nervous would not be the accurate word to describe just how I was feeling. We had driven twelve hours to New Orleans and with too many coffees in me, I was hyped up, I had never been to a hotel with a man especially not a nice hotel like this one. Huge rooms and wide balconies impressed me as very extravagant. Here we were and there was no turning back now.
I remember the first time that I shared that I was a virgin and intended to remain that way until I was married. Joe looked at me like I had spoken in an alien tongue. “Why?”, was all he could manage. I smiled remembering how confused he was. After a short prayer, I told him of my beliefs about the sacredness of each human body. That they were gifts to each other and that I wanted mine to be a special one.
A year later, and here we were ready to start our lives together and although that made me nervous, I was ready. I knew that the wait would be worth it… “What? This is not a motel. This is a madam’s house!” I declared in shock.
© Carol Campbell
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surpraz, surpraz, surpraz, as Gomer Pyle might say!!
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Wow this is wonderful. Wow
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Thank you!
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This is where NO! must assume the decibel level of a herd of bison.
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That’s for sure!
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wow, yes, a shock for sure.
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I don’t understand the ending…I think I missing something….
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It was a whore house after a whole story of chastity. I was trying to be ironic. 🙂 Thanks for asking.
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Oh that’s what it meant. I didn’t know they were referred to as the “madam’s house.”
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Oh. Yes, maybe that’s not very clear!
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It might just be me. I live a rather sheltered life.
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Wonderful story! How sad that she had saved herself for marriage and he took her to a Madam’s house! What!? LOL!
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Thank you. It was ironic, huh?
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Yes! I can’t figure out why he took her there?
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In my mind, it was a mistake based on how gorgeous the building was. I did not make that clear though.
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I was wondering if he thought it was the hotel. So that’s what happene. They thought it was the hotel.
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Yes. Need to try and be clearer! 🙂
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It still was a great story!
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I’m in that learning curve! Thank you. Your comment helped me continue learning. 🙂
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You and I both! 🙂
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Wow, some guy she chose! I’d love to read the next scene… That would be quite the conversation!
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Yes it sure would!! Thanks for visiting!
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Wow – let’s hope he’s not planning to sell her!
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I hope not! 😉
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Good story. I’d say annulment and adios to this guy. 🙂
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Me too! Thank you, Susan!
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