His adoration for chess was exceeded only by his need for control. He would play for hours with anyone who would sit down even for a moment. One day, she was watching him as he demanded that she sit quietly and admire his acuity with his mastery. It dawned upon her consciousness that she was a chess piece to him. His queen. The thrill of trying to control her was the same as that he had while playing and strategizing. “Stand here, do that, don’t you ever…”, were his moves in their game. Slowly, she rose from the chair that she had been so dutifully sitting on and she looked at him with an intensity that he did not expect and said one word.
“Goodbye”, the words trailing behind her as she walked out.
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© Carol Campbell
https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2016/02/02/photo-challenge-98-february-2-2016/
Photo Challenge #98
Wow I love the twist and chess empowered her 🙂
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That’s great. Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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NICE!!!! LOVE the way you empowered this woman!!! Thank you!!! ❤
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Thank you, dearheart!
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Sometimes that is the only words needed.
A well executed piece of fiction! For some a very real reality.
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Thank you and sadly you’re right!
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woops…those are…
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🙂
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Such a great piece of writing. She made the right move.
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Yes she did! Thank you!
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Brilliant! I guess he wasn’t that good or else he would have planned further ahead.
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Haha. That is the truth! Thank you.
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hehehe…you are welcome!
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thanks Carol for sharing your response to the photo challenge 🙂
you have indeed, interpreted this in a very masterful way – clearly, well played on your part.
Cheers~ Pat
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Thank you, Pat.
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always a pleasure to read Carol 🙂
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🙂
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Damn, what a sharp ending. Seems like a story of every alternate relationship that had gone sour.
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Thank you! Have a blessed day!
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