A Senryu

dark forest landscape at night
Dollar Photo Club

tearful forest path

my steps are unsteady

my thoughts abrasive

~

© Carol Campbell

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3 Word Wednesday

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The words this week are:

Tearful, Unsteady, Abrasive

❤ ❤ ❤

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Published by: writersdream9

I have been writing all my life but for the most part, it has been a secret. My parents did not believe writing was a good way to earn money so I hid my poems. Then one day, I wanted to comment on an essay that a friend had written and found myself with a blog. That quiet whisper inside said, "You can write your poetry and no one will ever know.". I knew nothing of followers and the like at that time. So, here I am trying to learn my craft and enjoying every moment of it. My personal details are, I'm 57, married for 39 years, have one grown son who is God's gift to us and last but not least at all, I'm a Baha'i which basically means that I love all humanity.

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14 thoughts on “A Senryu”

  1. ah, so much not being said in these words that allow the reader to interject his.herself into the piece…a beautiful senryu, Carol

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  2. The photo and the words remind me of the opening battle scene in Japan in the Tom Cruise movie, The Last Samurai, taking place in an eerie, foggy, surreal forest where soldiers of the emperor, crouching and cringing in fear and anxiety, are waiting the ghostly rebel samurai warriors to make their fierce attack, .

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