October breeze
leaves dance gracefully
some kiss the ground
~
© Carol Campbell
Hamish and Chevrefeuille teach us about the apparently controversial addition of movement in haiku. It’s called “undou”. Our task was to include it in our own haiku. Here is some inspiration.
seasons come and go
she … the moon always the same
plays with the waves
dew drops shimmer
on colorful leaves
rainbows sparkle
waterfall of colors
leaves whirl through the street –
departing summer
ankle chimes
listen to the movement
of the young dancer
ballet dancers
ghostly images covered in smoke
modern swan lake
© Chèvrefeuille
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I love your Haiku! The poem you shared is beautiful.
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Thank you, Joy!
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I love the comment about leaves kissing the ground.
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Thank you very much!
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wow your haiku and the prompt’s are gorgeous!
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Thanks so much! Chevrefeuille is an excellent haiku master.
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You’re welcome. 🙂 Yes I agree!
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Thank you Carol for your kind words … This haiku you share here is wonderful and full of exciting movement, a real undou haiku.
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You’re welcome and thank you.
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Bravo! Really splendid post!
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Thank you, Georgia.
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You’re very welcome Carol.
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it’s fun to see leaves dance in the wind, especially a brisk October breeze. and then when they snap off to gently float in the breeze, back and forth, until they gently kiss the ground.
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…and they do so in spectualar fashion…a nice one:) Fall is my favorite time of year:)
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Thank you!
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