Playing guitar was not easy for Imelda. What was heard in her head did not seem to make it to the ear when she played. Everyone told her that she was very talented and played with passion but to her, it always fell short. Ten years old she was when the lessons started. Practicing till her fingers bled, her parents almost took the guitar away. Finally, the calluses formed and the bleeding stopped. Her heart, though, kept bleeding with the need to perfect her music. Talking to the guitar. Coaxing the strings to give her the sounds she knew were there. Sounds that just had to be pulled out by her fingers.
Playing tonight in a coffee house on the Southside, she was somewhat blase but she turned her mind to her muse and set her fingers to the steel. Connecting as never before, the guitar was on fire. The flames of perfection in the music engulfed her completely. All the years of practice and striving culminated in that one performance. The audience rose from their seats in spontaneous combustion applause. To that, she was oblivious for she had found her groove at last.
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© Carol Campbell
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Great story! I’m glad all that practice finally paid off for her! 🙂
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Thank you. I hope so too!
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great story! I can feel her drive for perfection and I understand it. It drives me too!
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I loved this story! It is well written and draws you right in. So happy she had such a great performance and her dream was achieved.
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Thank you. That means so much!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Of course!
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Imelda finally found her groove. This is what I imagined Bonnie Raitt happened with her. Kewl story!!
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Practice…practice… practice…. Well told!
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Thank you!
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Wow! Every musicians’ dream comes true… when the years of practices gain the applause of the audience. Wonderfully penned! 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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sublime…
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Thank you.
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Wonderful story! It flows so nicely, something I sometimes struggle to accomplish. Great job!
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Thank you!
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Brilliant! I am glad all her effort eventually paid off.
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Yes. Thank you!
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Fantastic imagery! 🙂
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Thank you!
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