Puddles~Pantoum

Springtime
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Oh, the joy of a puddle

Jump in the water with glee

Fun like blowing a bubble

Splashes fly everywhere free

~

Jump in the water with glee

Not the time to be subtle

Splashes fly everywhere free

Don’t be in such a muddle

~

Not the time to be subtle

Oh, the joy of a puddle

Don’t be in such a muddle

Fun like blowing a bubble

~~~~

© Carol Campbell

Poetry Challenge #21

Pantoum prompt from Jane Dougherty at, https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2016/03/09/poetry-challenge-21-pantoum/

We were supposed to make the repeating lines subtly change in meaning in each line. I was unable to achieve that but I enjoyed writing of this find memory of mine! Thank you, Jane.

 

I am sharing this at Poets United for the Poetry Pantry also! Go have read!

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http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2016/03/poetry-pantry-293.html

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Published by: writersdream9

I have been writing all my life but for the most part, it has been a secret. My parents did not believe writing was a good way to earn money so I hid my poems. Then one day, I wanted to comment on an essay that a friend had written and found myself with a blog. That quiet whisper inside said, "You can write your poetry and no one will ever know.". I knew nothing of followers and the like at that time. So, here I am trying to learn my craft and enjoying every moment of it. My personal details are, I'm 57, married for 39 years, have one grown son who is God's gift to us and last but not least at all, I'm a Baha'i which basically means that I love all humanity.

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