Cries of agony issued from their once quiet village. The little girl added her tears to the growing melee. “Mommy?”, she whispered between cries. Reaching out her arms, she searched for the familiar touch of her mother. There was no familiar cotton dress. The scent of her was not there. Turning to her right, she felt nothing but dirt and rubble. Brother was not next to her as he had been just moments before. In that moment of great fear, her tears abandoned her. Silence within took over and she let go of all she had ever known. There was no other choice.
Outside of the photoshop that they had been visiting, destruction was everywhere. The bombs had razed the small town. Sounds of bombs echoed through the square and in the ears of its peoples. Nothing but the physical manifestation of the entire imbalance of all of mankind.
© Carol Campbell
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Thank you so much! ❤
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Very poignant! The last line, “Nothing but the physical manifestation of the entire imbalance of all of mankind,” grabbed me right in the heart! Such a sad and tragic thing in today’s world. When will it ever stop? Wonderful story, Carol!
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Thank you, Joy! 🙂
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My pleasure, Carol!
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🙂
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so sad. that photo could have been anywhere in the 3rd world where violence by terrorist bombs are all too common. with the attacks in Brussels it brings home the point no place is safe.
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Awful story. Poor littl girl. Well written!
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Wow. What a beautiful tear jerker! I love that last line. My fantasy fiction is built on that idea
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This is where I would have put myself between the girl and the bomb.
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I wish there was an emoticon for humble respect!
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Sadly this is an experience that many people are experiencing across the world. Great use of the prompt and the current news.
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Thank you!
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What a sad reality. The thing is that this is happening in some place as we speak. Maybe not a photo centre but a metro or anywhere else. Well told
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Thank you!
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