freshly mowed grass field
sunset light
the cows are fed and full
~
© Carol Campbell
http://www.napowrimo.net/were-off-to-the-races/
“And now, our prompt (optional, as always). Today, I challenge you to write a lune. This is a sort of English-language haiku. While the haiku is a three-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllable count, the lune is a three-line poem with a 5-3-5 syllable count. There’s also a variant based on word-count, instead of syllable count, where the poem still has three lines, but the first line has five words, the second line has three words, and the third line has five words again. Either kind will do, and you can write a one-lune poem, or write a poem consisting of multiple stanzas of lunes. Happy writing!”
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Moo, cheer the cows.
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Yes 😀
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beautiful, peaceful too your poem. It evokes a time of simpler things. 🙂
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That’s what I long for. 🙂
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Me too 🙂
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Very peaceful and serene! Look forward to seeing more of you during the NaPoWriMo!
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Thank you. I will check your work also!
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OO! Epiphany! -warm hope cools – in reality.
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Yes!!
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a serene and serendipitous landscape. the day’s work is done. all is well.
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Debussy would have liked the bucolic nature of this lune, read to the strains of his Au Clair de la Lune.
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I hope so! 🙂 That would be nice!
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