standing in a long line
.
black cats everywhere
their meows are dissonant
.
feline scratches on every back
fur flying all around
their hollers mixed with sneezes
~~
© Carol Campbell
https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2016/01/30/bps-shadorma-beyond-january-30-2016/
Today Georgia teaches us about the Cherita form of poetry. I’ll let her explain.
“Today I thought we’d look at a “Cherita”. Cherita (pronounced CHAIR-rita) is a linked poetry form of one-, two-, and three-line stanzas. Cherita is Malay for story in fact:
A cherita consists of a one-line stanza, followed by a two-line stanza, and then finishing with a three-line stanza. It can either be written solo or by up to three partners.
The Cherita tells a story. It was created by ai li (A UK poet and artist) on June 22, 1997 in memory of her grandparents who were raconteur extraordinaire. It was also inspired by Larry Kimmel’s sensitive recognition of a shorter form contained within the opening three-verse stanza of ai li’s LUNENGA, which was created May 27, 1997.
The Cherita arose out of the English-language haiku and tanka tradition, but is more anecdotal, or nano-narrative, in nature than are the “momentary” haiku and the more lyrical tanka, though it is easily adaptable to lyrical expression. It is imagistic and depends on conciseness and suggestion for its effect.
Pasted from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cherita
And here’s a sample:
after seeing you off
taking the path along
the canal
a rustle of
leaves
underfoot
© Larry Kimmel
and
his bedtime story
the never-ending tales
of enchantment
now you see them
now you don’t
night fairies
© ai li
So, restated:
A 6 line poem in three separate stanzas, a single line, a couplet, then a tercet.
Each stanza is a complete strophe
The line lengths are at the poets’ discretion
The poem should be presented, centered and untitled.
It should be imagistic and concise.”
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Like the humour in this one. You captured the chaotic scene.
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Thank you. It was a stretch but fun!
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Interesting format…another variation on the Haiku? 😉
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Apparently, it springs form the haiku. Maybe you’ll give it a go?
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Might do at some point. 😉
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A wonderful piece in another beautiful form. i may have to try this one 🙂
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You may want to follow this prompt site. Thank you.
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You are welcome. I just may do that 🙂
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Ah .. you wrote the cherita beautifully! 🙂
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Very nice, and an interesting form, too.
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Isn’t it? Thank you.
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Now here is something I’d like to play with…
See my words at:
gramswisewords.blogspot.com
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Will do.
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I like this! A poem about a cat fight! 🙂
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Hahaha! Didn’t think of it that way but it’s true!
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and it’s awesome! 🙂
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Oh yay! Off To read it!
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Lots of fun with this one! Bravo!
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Thank you!
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very good. 2 unhappy campers, the old man and kitty.
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just learnt about this today through one of your subscribers. This is not my form of poetry but i like it. I write a lot of poems and never knew there were so many variations. Its interesting. I will practice. Thanks for the information
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My pleasure! I am going to visit your blog!:)
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