Climbing the stairs was easy for Santiago. He had climbed those cold, stone steps a million times before. Today, however, his feet were leaden and feeling so cold. Rushing through the streets of the village breathlessly like a speeding train out of control. Trying to escape. To escape what? Wherever he ran, he was still there. The cutting, all pervasive grief was still within.
Santa was his rose. A beautiful Peace Rose. You know the ones colored pale yellow with pink stripes painted on the petals and around the edges? That’s how she was. Filled with hope and passion. Exactly a balance to his often cynical and hopeless mood. Her heart light penetrated the darkness and now she was gone. Slipping away in the middle of the night. The worse thing was that he didn’t know what had happened. They were to do an autopsy the next day. He asked himself what could have taken her from him at so young an age. How would he go on?
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© Carol Campbell
https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2016/03/07/fffaw-week-of-03-08-2016/
Thank you, Joy at Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer and Louise at The Storyteller’s Abode!
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This is great
Love it
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Thank you, Sheldon!
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Oh Carol, such a heart touching story! How sad that the love of his life has died and he’s trying to run from his grief. Excellent story!
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Thank you, Joy! How do we get the Linkz frog on our posts?
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There is a link that says “Link-up and it is blue and underlined. Click on that and go into InLinkz. You may have to sign in (it’s free to sign up) and follow the instructions. They will give you a link up code and you copy that and paste it on the html side of your post.
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Thank you!
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And! Got me going then, mystry!
chris
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Thank you!
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This is reflective of my own experience.
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I am very sorry but I know that you are near her now!
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how sad. a very powerful, punchy little story.
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Thank you!
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beautiful story with a sad end. I love the rose comparison for his lady love.
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To be someone’s rose is so appealing!
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This has great detail in it – wonderful read!
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Thank you!
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Sad and poetically written story. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you!
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