the yellow rose
tickles the bulls nose
as he forages
~
© Carol Campbell
This rhyming in haiku is new to me but I learn a lot at CDHK. Here’s the assignment from Chevrefeuille:
This month we are exploring haiku writing techniques used by Basho, my sensei. And I am happy to announce to you all that I will create a CDHK e-book “In The Way of Basho” in which I will gather all the posts about the haiku writing techniques used by Basho and the CD-Specials in which I introduce disciples of Basho, the so called “Shoomon disciples” or “Shoomon school”. Next to all the posts I will include your submissions to every post at the end of every chapter (episodes). You can already find a preview at the right side of our Kai, free for download.
Okay … back to our haiku writing technique for this episode. In this episode I love to introduce “kasuri” or“frame rhyme”.
from Kyoto’s many houses
a crowd of ninety-nine thousand
blossom viewing
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
To understand this “kasuri” technique I also will give you the Romaji translation of this haiku:
kyo wa kuman kusen kunju no hanami kana
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I love this poem and I love the idea of a frame rhyme!
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Thank you. It’s a difficult one and I am not sure I got what he was asking for. It was fun!
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You’re welcome 🙂 I read the prompt and I wasn’t certain what he was looking for either. 🙂 Though you had a rhyme in there, so you must have got it!
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I hope so. 🙂
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😀 I started outlining the topics for each letter 🙂 I just need U, V, W, X, Y & Z. I’ll find some time to sift through old stories. I’m sure I have something for them. I have been writing about Shayari since I was a little kid.
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Wow! That’s great! How fulfilling it must be to know they are bringing such delight to readers!
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I hope they are bringing that delight 🙂 Only handful of people have expressed that delight. I hope those who remain silent are enjoying.
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I believe they are! When can we collab? This afternoon?
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I’m available now if you like. Later is good too. Just let me know
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Later would be good. Maybe 2 my time?
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that would be 3 my time? (I’m Eastern Standard, I think you’re central…which is one hour behind me) How about 3 pm your time? I should be back by then. I was going to run out in a little bit.
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Sure. There may be one possible conflict but I will try. Hang in we’ll get it together 😀
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I’ll be available from thence onwards so just pop on when you can. I’ll check every 15 minutes for you
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Great!
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😀
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I’m back on docs. Sorry my mom called 🙂
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No problem. Managing gatherings online can be a matter of timing, huh?
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yes! at least we’re close to being in the same time zone. it gets complicated when that’s not the case but never impossible! 🙂
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Never!
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😀
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I found this to be somewhat more challenging. Fine job!
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Thank you. I did too! I still am not really sure if I understand the kind of rhyme asked for. It was fun though!
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A beautiful haiku and perfect rhyming !
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Pl have a look at my post of the same prompt @https://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2016/03/17/stream/
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Thank you!
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Wow! what an adorable image you have penned, Carol!
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Thank you very much!
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Wow! The photo and your beautiful words make such a lovely lovely yellow piece! ❤
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Thank you!
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My pleasure! 😀
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it’s cute to imagine a big bruising bull who would be interested in a yellow rose. the yellow rose of texas? a longhorn steer from texas? just wondering……….
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