She gazed at the clutter and mess
Her feelings she has to repress
The humans drink all day and night
The house always cold and uptight
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The fighting caused a huge ruckus
She gazed at the clutter and mess
Not convinced that things were alright
Simply sat and mourned the blight
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Alcohol caused them to regress
Dropped from their own human noblesse
She gazed at the clutter and the mess
Her silken fur no longer white
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Her dreams of other homes useless
Them all she must quickly repress
Spent her narrow days in distress
She gazed at the clutter and the mess
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© Carol Campbell 2015
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Wow this image really spoke to you and what a poetic story unfolded from it.
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Yes it did. For three days I pondered. Thanks as always! ❤
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I skipped this one. It just didn’t inspire anything other than “what the hell?”
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Yes, I hear that!
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Let’s hope Sunday’s is more inspiring 😉
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That cat looks so disgruntled and who can blame it? You told a great story to match the picture.
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Thank you very much!
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thoughtful cat !
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How awful for this innocent kitty ~~ humans without an ounce of sense or decorum. (I saw a kitty that looked innocent/vulnerable) ~~ I enjoyed your poem.
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Thank you!
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Poor cat.. I hope she was fed at least.
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when I think of kitties, I think of Garfield, the “101 uses for a dead cat” book of years ago , other “funny” stuff, etc. like kitty saying to him/herself, ” you’ve got to be kidding! not another g.d. mess!” but this kitty somehow looks revolted, reluctant to return home, like many kids of alcoholic parents, wondering what kind of “tuna surprise” awaits at home.
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Trust animals to show exactly what is up. I can tell the cat is not impressed and pining away from all the disdain around.
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True! Thank you!
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Wow! Wonderful take on this prompt. The repetition works well.
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Thank you!
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Even animals can sense the mess we humans make of life. Great voice for the image!
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Thanks, Susie!
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How wonderfully you’ve unfolded a story through the pic!…loved it… 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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To your stress on “ess” – Yess!
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Hahaha! Thank you!
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“narrow days” is a wonderfully evocative phrase. Really gets me thinking about how expansive I allow my own days to be. Thank you!
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Thank you! It’s wonderful that your days are expansive! 🙂
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