bay waters course
circling around the islands
advance guards
~
bay waters course
flowing with the outer tides
the bay whispers
~
circling around the islands
reflecting the oceans tides
the warriors are safe
~
advance guards
strong watchmen for peace
their nearness a delight
~~
© Carol Campbell 2015
Inspired by:
summer grass
the only remains of soldiers’
dreams
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
and:
ancient warriors ghosts
mists over the foreign highlands –
waiting for the full moon
© Chèvrefeuille
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Delightful variation…. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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I love this! I see the guards going about their business about a bay 🙂 reminds me of a scene from my book 🙂
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Great minds think alike! Thanks!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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these advance guards, the army calls it “walking point”, lead the armies and navies of the earth, all its peoples, away from the shoals of war, toward the safe harbor of world peace, once and for all. toward
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I enjoyed the various takes on the prompt … nicely written Carol.
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Thank you!
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A wonderful series Carol each haiku a gem painting another scene, but all together they make a wonderful stroy. Thank you.
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* stroy* I meant story
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😀
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I very much appreciate your feedback! Thanks! 🙂
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You’re so welcome
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