Give me the reason
that you have
b
r
o
k
e
n
away
We danced
We sang
We complained
We fought
But I thought we’d
s t a y
Let’s go
p*l*a*y
in the rain
Okay?
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© Carol Campbell 2016
http://thesecretkeeper.net/2016/01/11/weekly-writing-prompt-19/
Words: Reason, Break, Stay, Give, and Rain
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🙂 Very cool!
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Thank you!
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Love the way you played with your words.
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Thank you. I admit it was kind of fun.
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me too! It’s a lovely poem and so bittersweet!
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Very good Carol….love the way the theme is reflected in the ‘format’ and presentation. 🙂
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Super design, like performance art, to show your free verse & shape of your poem. I love it. Very imaginative. I particularly like the style you used with broken away. Totally Excellent. – jk
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Thank you, jk!
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let’s play in the rain some more.
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