Must walk the path preordained for me
My own soul’s rhythm and music
Dancing to the inner beat
Rebel in my own way
Ban the critics please
My little patch
Just for me
To be
Free
~
© Carol Campbell
The words this week are:
Clear/Way/Ban/Patch/Rebel
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Ah..what the soul wants – to be free. Lovely!
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Thank you!
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I loved this one and shared it to Facebook. Keep them coming.
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Thank you very much!
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Excellent, Carol! For a moment I thought you were writing a ‘Reverse Etheree’…… not the easiest. I’ve only had a ‘go’ at the fundamental Etheree…might post it anon. This one is really good. Hugs! ❤
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Thank you. It’s a Nonet. I think this is only the first or the second time for me.
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They are not easy to write…to be sure…Not had a ‘go’ at them yet…. 😉
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Give it a try! 🙂
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Great write!
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lovely visual funnel pattern. we must follow our path, our beat, our heartbeat.
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yep, you caught me counting 🙂 well done counting down the syllables one less each time 🙂
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Yep. It’s called Nonet.
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thank you 🙂 I may eventually make one.
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You’re welcome!
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Nonets are nifty. So is walking one’s own path.
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Loved how you used the word in your poem. Felt your strength and rebellion. 🙂
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Thank you, Susan!
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Welcome back. A beautiful design like a reverse waterfall. I keep feeling, this is the week I am going to attempt to create another Nonet. I have been brave once. It does challenge you. You wrote a poem which is a piece of art. Such perfect choice of wording each line till the end. I philosophy which if practiced globally, might be able to start turning the world around toward some understanding of living together inside a deep sense of life and peace. You did the words a good one. The hand, mind, heart of a true poet lives within you.
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Thank you for a lovely comment!
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