The bright Spring day had just started for Fran. Walking fast and then slowing down to observe her surroundings was not the best aerobic exercise but that’s all she was capable of. Thoughts filled her head of her profound loss. Zoey was the reason she felt any love in her life lately. They were friends. It had been 6 weeks and her feelings were still raw and course knives. She knew she had to heal and continue with her plans. Friends told her that her grief was disproportionate to the loss. “She was, after all, just a dog!”, they jeered. Hah!
Off to her left, she heard a barking. She knew it was a playful bark; a happy one. Turning, she saw a dog staring at her attentively. There to the right of him was a sign that said, “Dog Free to Good Home”!
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© Carol Campbell
https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2016/07/04/fffaw-challenge-week-of-07-05-2016/
This is wonderful! It is true that a dog can fill that lonely ache inside of us, just as Fran felt. Wonderful story, Carol!
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Thanks so much, Joy!
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Anyone who says a loved companion that was lost was “just” a pet deserves to be ignored for a while, if not much worse! I hope her happy new dog friend helps to cheer her up.
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Yes. I believe he will!
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Ah!!! Beautiful, Carol! The emptiness will soon be filled…Perhaps Zoey led her that way? 😉 Hugs! ❤
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Yes! 🙂 Thank you!
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Hugs!
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Never mock a pain you don’t know.
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So very true. The dogs I’ve lost have caused great mourning!
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The void fulfilled at the right moment!
Hank
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Exactly!
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Awww what a heartwarming tale you spun 🙂
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Thanks very much!
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you’re welcome 🙂
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And the cycle begins again with a new dog. People who get close to their pets can develop empathic feelings to a superlative degree, given that these pets will return unconditional and sometimes even unrequited love. “Just a dog.” Yeah, right!!
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Awe. I was just getting ready to walk my puppy 💚
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❤
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This was a most excellent piece of writing dear Carol, you captured the feelings of loss and the prospects of what is to come.. As those magical moments when destiny plays its part to bring together those that are meant to bond in Love. And it matters not if they have four legs or two.. 🙂
( I know how deeply that grief flows when we loose our four legged friends )
Beautiful post Carol.. Love Sue xx
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Oh, so true! Love is love!
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❤ xxx
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Ohhhhh, Carol!!!! No words. Just tears. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I understand, dearheart!
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What a hopeful story and true to the pain of losing a fuzzy friend.
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Thank you!
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Dogs make great companions
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